Untitled Fantasy Land story

Post by **TheShoveller** » Sat Sep 22, 2018 6:56 am

Ok, so for anyone who wasn't aware, I tried my hand at writing a story. It's going to be turned into a comic at some point, but the story's a bit different in some aspects due to the differences in how a visual media like a comic conveys some things and how a long-text thing like a story would do it, but it's mostly the same. The opening and ending are a little rough - probably more than a few parts in the middle, too - but considering I haven't written jack in a decade and a half... well, it could be worse.

Anywho, here's a link to it over on the Wiki, since it's a bit too long to post here. I don't have a name for it, though I was thinking of names for the various "issues" of the comic format. Probably something like "Beta Test" or something code-related.

http://www.fembotwiki.com/index.php?tit ... Land_Story

Thanks in advance for giving it a gander, and for any criticism or feedback on it.