Beni Nascosti

Share your fembot fiction and fantasies here or discuss the craft of writing by asking for or giving suggestions.
Post Reply
User avatar
liliwinnt6
Banned
Posts: 1326
Joined: Tue Sep 21, 2004 2:44 am
Technosexuality: Built
Identification: Human
Gender: Male
Location: My beloved Shanghai

Re: Beni Nascosti

Post by liliwinnt6 » Wed Mar 30, 2016 6:20 pm

second kill from fembot command, we gotta make them pay.
Fellas, you may address me as Boris, my ID could be troublesome for you to call me.
BTW, my stories would be updated without notifications.
https://www.turboimagehost.com/album/14 ... ock_images
Top
User avatar
Gorgo
Posts: 574
Joined: Fri Jul 05, 2002 4:06 am
Technosexuality: Built and Transformation
Identification: Human
Gender: Male
Location: Fort Erie, Ontario
x 70
x 14
Contact:
Contact Gorgo

Re: Beni Nascosti

Post by Gorgo » Thu Mar 31, 2016 6:46 am

Be honest, R-Man, did I prompt this in any way? :lol:
Canadian lighthouse to U.S. warship approaching it: This is a lighthouse; your call.
Top
User avatar
Gorgo
Posts: 574
Joined: Fri Jul 05, 2002 4:06 am
Technosexuality: Built and Transformation
Identification: Human
Gender: Male
Location: Fort Erie, Ontario
x 70
x 14
Contact:
Contact Gorgo

Re: Beni Nascosti

Post by Gorgo » Thu Mar 31, 2016 8:17 am

Ouch! :shock: Sorry to hear that! Hope it's better now!
Canadian lighthouse to U.S. warship approaching it: This is a lighthouse; your call.
Top
User avatar
Gorgo
Posts: 574
Joined: Fri Jul 05, 2002 4:06 am
Technosexuality: Built and Transformation
Identification: Human
Gender: Male
Location: Fort Erie, Ontario
x 70
x 14
Contact:
Contact Gorgo

Re: Beni Nascosti

Post by Gorgo » Thu Mar 31, 2016 8:34 pm

:thumbsup: Good to hear.
Canadian lighthouse to U.S. warship approaching it: This is a lighthouse; your call.
Top
Extyr
Posts: 399
Joined: Sat Jul 30, 2011 6:30 pm
Technosexuality: Built
Identification: Human
Gender: Male
x 79
x 33
Contact:
Contact Extyr

Re: Beni Nascosti

Post by Extyr » Fri Apr 08, 2016 7:57 am

It's always great to read something by robotman! That said, I have 2 plot nitpicks: Why is the access to the fembot command base in the changing rooms instead of say the backstore or the lunch room. And wouldn't making a robot duplicate of their victim be even more risky than just having her vanish without a trace? Even if the master computer didn't know that she told nobody where she was going, her family will eventually notice her disappearance and people will look for her. Finding her lookalike in the shop is gonna put them under much more scrutiny than simply doing nothing. It's not like the duplicate has her memories... Or maybe I'm just overthinking this and the whole point was to show that fembot command is unscrupulous AND dumb.
Top
Post Reply

Return to “Stories”



Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 10 guests