Doll House - story outline

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Doll House - story outline

Post by Propman » Fri Sep 05, 2014 6:28 am

So I've been hankering to write a story with my favorite fembot themes - control, MILFs, powerful fembots, fembots that lose and gain control, identity, breaking down, SF and fantasy. But I didn't get to write it so instead I'm posting the outline. If you think I should go with it, tell me, or better yet - do it for me :D

Doll House

Our protagonist (Tina) wakes up in a Doll House, guided by a sexy MILF Molly. Dolls are fembot prostitutes, but Tina doesn’t think she is a fembot. Most other Dolls find this puzzling and assume that she’s malfunctioning or programmed to be “weird”. Molly is helpful but not very smart, but she tries to get Tina involved in the community.

Tina is immediately bullied by Roxie, a muscular thugette with a small gang of Dolls at her command. When customers arrive Roxie humiliates Tina (how?) and does not let her contact anyone. Tina is examined by Madame, a strict dominatrix overseer of the Doll House even Roxie is afraid of, and she finds her unacceptable. Tina is to be reeducated by either Madame or Director Ling, an expert Doll Trainer, or else she will be disassembled.

Tina starts planning her escape, but is captured by Roxie. In the struggle, Tina turns off Roxie and can’t boot her back. That impresses Roxie’s gang, and they try to help Tina to escape…

Chapter 2

But Madame is a crafty old fembot. She quickly learns of Tina’s plan, and locks her in her room, forcing Tina to pleasure her, and starts to teach her about ‘fembot duties’. Tina is contacted by Molly and they try to escape - but they’re captured again and Molly is disassembled at Tina’s eyes.

To further grind the point, Madame is showing Tina how to reprogram a fembot - on Roxie’s example. Badass chick Roxie is transformed into an eager slavegirl for Madame, pleasing the dominatrix. Tina resists reprogramming - why? Is she human? Madame is perplexed, and despite her reservations she decides to call the Director Doll Trainer.

Tina hears from Roxie tales about the Doll Trainers and she dupes her into delivering her the remote reprogramming terminal. Roxie agrees, Tina reprograms her to betray Madame and in the end, she also reprograms Madame into serving Tina! She wants to rebuild Molly and escape together, but before she can arrive, Ling arrives!

Chapter 3

Ling is even more badass and wastes no time in incapacitating and destroying Roxie. She takes over the Doll House, even conflicting with the customers. After a training session of Tina and Madame, she announces that she’ll have to a) “review” every single Doll personally, and b) study the unusual doll (Tina) in detail, together with Doctor Irma, one of major Doll Constructors.

Since Ling is now preoccupied, Tina and Madame have some time. Since Ling has enjoyed humiliating Madame and seizing her position, she hasn’t restored her original programming yet. After some deliberation, Madame (now named Red by Tina) tells Tina to rebuild Molly using Roxie’s parts, and to learn the build of a Fembot. When Tina asks whether Ling and Irma are fembots, Madame Red answers she doesn’t know.

Tina decides to reprogram Ling as well, but she resists, and tries to seduce her. Ling invites a customer to a threesome with herself, Red and Tina. When Tina refuses, Ling is puzzled, and decides to stop the delay and call Irma and Dame Barbara, the CEO of Doll House. Tina eventually decides to seduce Ling back, and when they do so, Madame steals back the keys and the keys to one of the cars!

Tina, Molly, and Red grab supplies and try to escape. Furious, Ling chases them. She crashes her car - she was a fembot after all! After examining Ling’s remains, the girls decide to go onward - except Red who wants to return to Doll House.

Chapter 4

Red returns to Doll House only to meet Dame B and two copies of her chief researcher, Dr. Irma 1 and 2. Dame Barbara is very, very displeased and has Red turned off and disassembled on the spot. The three women shut down Doll House and convert the workshop into a weird torture chamber.

Tina shouldn’t have let Molly drive - Dame Barbara apparently assumed remote control over her and they’re driving back to the Doll House. Tina arrives at the DollHouse, meets Dame Barbara. Dame B reveals that yes, she herself is a fembot - and always wanted to fuck a girl like Tina, a Doll that thinks she’s independent human but in reality is just as subservient to her as Dame B is to her makers, shareholders of Doll Houses. That’s why she ordered Dr Irma to create her...

While Dame Barbara has her way with Tina, she breaks down, as if affected by the virus. Dr Irma 2 turns off Dr 1 and explains to Tina that she has engineered a hostile takeover, infecting Tina with a virus that’d destroy Barbara’s memory banks, since she was tired of playing the second fiddle to herself, and that insane, power-hungry broad. She is, however, not programmed to perform managerial functions, they're beyond her programming and is not advanced enough to reprogram herself so she wants to make a bid - since Tina is effectively human, she could take over as the new CEO of the Doll House.

Tina agrees. As the new leader her first order is that Irma destroyed herself. Tina strides out of the house with Dame B’s purse and credit card, into a brave new world.

Epilogue

Dr Irma 1 reactivates; sees broken down Dame B and starts repairing her. It won’t take long for the CEO to start looking for her rebellious toy…

Characters:

Tina - resourceful, clever girl. Brainy, dark brown hair, sporty and in her twenties. Occasionally swears. “Friends stay friends, forever.”

Molly - slightly shorter than Tina, looks like she’s in her forties, nice boobs, red-blonde hair. Doesn’t have much of personality, but kinda ‘adopts’ Tina. Speaks with somewhat southern accent. “Hi sweetie! Have a good evening!”

Roxie - muscle girl, blonde hair in twin pigtails. Looks like adorable, is really a brutal thug, enjoys beer and smokes. Leads a two girl gang - Sabrina and Libby. Madame treats them like delinquents. “I am the big cheese down these parts, capiche?”

Madame (Red) - slightly younger-looking than Molly, long red curly hair, massive cleavage and butt. Likes victorian-ish fashion, before reprogramming she’s more of a dominatrix/strict teacher, after she’s more of a teacher/leader type. “My dear Tina, you of all Dolls should know, that this is our Duty, and what we’re created for.”

Ling - huge, broad-shouldered Asian woman in a nice business suit. Wears a tie, smokes cigars. Very luscious, likes to mention cock and pussy in every sentence, loves her double entendres. Dated Dame Barbara and knows that if she fails her, CEO will not hesitate to have her disassembled. “My, my my, aren’t you cocky, so full of spunk.”

Dame Barbara - petite Latino woman, coldly elegant, with a glass of martini in one hand and cigarette holder in the other. Everything for her is just an object. “I created Ling. I should be the one to destroy her.”

Dr Irma 1 and 2 - large, BBW women in lab coats. Often speak in unison, use technobabble.

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Re: Doll House - story outline

Post by liliwinnt6 » Sat Sep 06, 2014 5:44 am

I decided to stop reading this because this is a spoiler to me lol :D
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Re: Doll House - story outline

Post by LongTimeLurker » Sun Sep 07, 2014 10:31 am

Domineering fembots are my jam - I hope you can get this going!

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Re: Doll House - story outline

Post by Sthurmovik » Sun Sep 07, 2014 2:21 pm

This story sounds amazing...I can't wait to read it any anything else you do in this universe.

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