Simple Things: Part 2

[RoxxyRobofox]

beep beep beeeeeeep

[Adon]

I desperately want to get OS fixed up and give her a hug. She really doesn't deserve the raw deals she's been getting.

[TW]

Agreed, its been a rough day for this metallic maiden. Hope her luck changes (and we get to read about it) soon!

[LongTimeLurker]

I hope that: Things will get better for poor OS
I believe that: This story will continue to be a fascinating read, robosmut or no
Regardless of what I just said, I demand: Robosmut denouement

[dieur]

Short segments, pointed, robots POV; I like it.

[Robjoe]

Glad you decided to continue with this.

WARNING: The lack of robosmut in this series will extend into the forseeable future. DO NOT INHALE FUMES

Even better! Now, I know I'm in the minority here, but I find no arousal or any other kind of interest in physically sexual acts. Long intercourse and masturbation scenes are almost always hypnotic for me to read and imagine. Now, I'm not totally against these concepts showing up in stories, as long as it's a sensible development in the plot and actually accomplishes something (I can think of a few stories off the top of my head that use masturbation to feed a growing malfunction, two of which are yours), but even then, it's a merely catalyst in my opinion, and I could take it or leave it.

Again, I know most people here find sexual scenes to be anything but boring, and I do not mean to insult them or their tastes in fiction. I merely want to express to you, DarkRexx, that I fully support the direction you're going in here, and eagerly await future installments.

Almost all of my turn-ons are robot-related in nature, and I must say that poor OS's helpless obedience to the simple command "calm down" was particularly evocative, and the build-up behind this part's short circuit was pretty gripping. "Oh. OH. Downpour outside, "Through the Cracks"... shit." OS's attempt and subsequent failure at holding conversation with the man was endearing, but ultimately, she was merely delaying the inevitable.

But regardless of my boner, you've got a really solid story going here. The concept of an old, out-dated android running cognitive programming far beyond her capabilities is something I myself enjoy exploring with a personal roleplay character, and it's a lot of fun, because her robotic nature can be kept at the forefront of the reader's attention and drive the plot, all without feeling forced or contrived. Not to mention, her frequent hang-ups, malfunctions, and other incredibly robotic issues draw a beautiful contrast with her otherwise very human demeanor and personality.

I can't help but invest myself in her constant struggles and failings, and though she's obviously in need of some extensive repairs at the moment, I don't think they should be handled particularly well. I bet she can't afford a skilled android technician, and more importantly, a solid repair job would ruin the fun!

[Bane]

I'm just gonna line in with all the positive feedback;
this truly is a great story and I'm eager to read more of it!

[RoxxyRobofox]

I just wanna say to everyone reading; thanks so much! I am having fun with this story so far and I'm thankful for the replies, criticism, and suggestions!

[RoxxyRobofox]

I hope that: Things will get better for poor OS
I believe that: This story will continue to be a fascinating read, robosmut or no
Regardless of what I just said, I demand: Robosmut denouement

Back! Get back in your hole, college student! *waves a student loan bill to repel the beast*

[DukeNukem 2417]

I desperately want to get OS fixed up and give her a hug. She really doesn't deserve the raw deals she's been getting.

Agreed, its been a rough day for this metallic maiden. Hope her luck changes (and we get to read about it) soon!

Thirded---OS deserves a lot better than she's been getting.

Maybe someone from an agency dedicated to the protection of artificial lifeforms can help her out.....?

[Uhoh]

Someone assist this poor, lonely OS unit to a shop for repair and an upgrade, then give her a hug! Great story, the perspective is definitely working

[DollSpace]

I love this story! OS is one of the most emotionally moving characters in recent memory. I really do hope that redhead is a bot ^_^ but our first priority is getting OS fixed up...I'm sad for her...