EMMA, the secret, page 42 to 47

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EMMA, the secret, page 42 to 47

Post by Mirage » Sun Apr 28, 2013 3:23 pm

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The last one is a joke page...

To be continued. Might take a while, my hands are killing me, I drew a lot this last week and weekend.

I think I need a small break.

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Please comment on what you think of the story, please. Nothing sucks more than working on something like this, and you almost no feedback.. It's not a ego thing, it's just wanting to know if we should bother on working on works like this, as if not, I got more stuff instead to draw on, AFRS or not.

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Re: EMMA, the secret, page 42 to 47

Post by gynoneko » Sun Apr 28, 2013 4:06 pm

For a 3DS comics, I am enjoying it. It is cute and your art work is improving. Keep up the good work. Makes me want to draw out some of my stores, for the practice.
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Re: EMMA, the secret, page 42 to 47

Post by Brytestar » Sun Apr 28, 2013 4:11 pm

I thought that Emma really got canned. A joke page very clever on your part.
Sometimes you just gotta look at the Bryte side!

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Re: EMMA, the secret, page 42 to 47

Post by --NightBattery-- » Sun Apr 28, 2013 4:23 pm

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Gentlemen, ladies. Notice he said We.
anyway.
For my side i'm always ready to give feedback to anyone, except on short long stories divided in chapters that i didnt catch at the beginning, like exo saves the day from gynoneko..i think in iron man when i read parts of it, but thats because i didnt catch the start.
If you ask me, you are one of the iconic part of this website.
and you draw fast and have cool ideas, but they are, to what i see, very yours and drawn from personal experience for me to try to convince you to modify things, that would be wrong.


Regards.

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Re: EMMA, the secret, page 42 to 47

Post by gynoneko » Sun Apr 28, 2013 11:07 pm

Well Battery, you could always start at the beginning... All the chapters include a link to the first one. I know it is long... But it is fun too, you'd probably enjoy it.
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Re: EMMA, the secret, page 42 to 47

Post by Robjoe » Fri May 03, 2013 12:11 pm

I have little idea what's going on here, but I have to say that for whatever reason I enjoyed Battery's picture more than I should have.

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