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by Deep Blue » Wed Jan 16, 2008 2:26 am
HKCEE 2000 Q1 Imaginative Writing - Student Essay A
One day, you and Sandy were preparing some food in the kitchen. You were using a knife. Suddenly, the knife slipped from your hand and cut Sandy's hand. You were shocked to discover that all you could see were wires, electrical circuits and computer chips. There was no blood...
This is a topic of high school Engish writing certificate examination at Hong Kong. Fembot has got into the school! What would you write on it?
Of course, it is taboo to write porn things in school.

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by jolshefsky » Wed Jan 16, 2008 10:21 am
I don't know how they do it in Hong Kong, but in America we'd be forced to write an outline. I think it would go something like this:
- Conflict
- One day, you and Sandy were preparing some food in the kitchen.
- You were using a knife. Suddenly, the knife slipped from your hand and cut Sandy's hand.
- You were shocked to discover that all you could see were wires, electrical circuits and computer chips.
- Discussion
- Sandy is surprised as well.
- Neither of you knew Sandy was a robot.
- Sandy isn't programmed to know that she was a robot and begins to malfunction.
- Sandy collapses on the floor saying she isn't a robot. Her voice slows and fades out until she eventually stops.
- Resolution
- You take off Sandy's clothes to see if you can fix her.
- You find that she is a convincing replica of a woman.
- You find a reset button on the back of her head and push it.
- Sandy says things in a computer voice then wakes up. She says her sexual systems have been activated.
- Although you are not attracted to women, you like sex with the robot Sandy. Oh, and you are a woman in case you didn't know, so you're bisexual now.
- You find a lab in Sandy's basement and fix her hand.
- Now you have a robot woman you can have sex with whenever you want.
May your deeds return to you tenfold,
--- Jason Olshefsky
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by Deep Blue » Wed Jan 16, 2008 1:42 pm
Good concept. But in Hong Kong, it just write the passage out directly, around 300 words. In about 1.5 hours.
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by Gorgo » Wed Jan 16, 2008 8:01 pm
Sounds like the way I write some of my stories.

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by Deep Blue » Mon Dec 10, 2012 10:33 pm
Gorgo wrote:Sounds like the way I write some of my stories.

I hope that there is someone write fembot stories base on the topic above, it is definitely that the sex story will not allowed in the examination. Here, we dont have restrictions, can we give the new meaning to this topic? As here is many native English speakers, I think we will do better than Hong Kong one. Let give the energy to the old school.
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by liliwinnt6 » Tue Dec 11, 2012 6:38 pm
How about "Tales Of Syntech 5"?
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by Korby » Wed Dec 12, 2012 5:16 am
liliwinnt6 wrote:How about "Tales Of Syntech 5"?
Second!
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That is a ill idea"
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