Need some ideas!

fection · Post by **fection** » Wed Oct 04, 2006 9:37 am

Hello there.
I'm trying to sort out episode 1 of a series of stories involving 'Candy', a slightly vacuous, very curvaceous pleasure droid - without much luck.
Actually, it's not that I don't have ideas. It might be that I just can't tell which idea will work best.
I think I need someone to 'bounce ideas off' and maybe get a different angle on them.
So, if you like a (cliched?) malfunction story with a pleasure droid designed to be the 'perfect beach bimbo' give me a PM and maybe you can help me sort out how the first story should go.
I know I have a pretty narrow margin of appreciation, compared to a lot of people here, but if you think you can help please do!
I have an idea for episode six which I think 'raises the ante', but I figure best to get the start sorted first.

zerodin · Post by **zerodin** » Wed Oct 04, 2006 10:40 pm

My suggestion is try something a tad bolder then the usual Candy fare.

fection · Post by **fection** » Thu Oct 05, 2006 2:45 am

Uhm...
Bolder, in what way?
I'm not a huge fan of written sex, if that's what you mean.
Do you mean a more serious, plot-based tone to the story?
Hmm... 'Bolder'....

zerodin · Post by **zerodin** » Thu Oct 05, 2006 9:04 am

Bolder as it a bit more risque, and maybe a plot where the women who usually ends up screwing Candy over(so to speak) ends up being the one with egg on her face(she could be a robot and not know it)

jakeCTom · Post by **jakeCTom** » Fri Oct 06, 2006 7:44 am

Try serious, see what you get either way it will be good. You got talent kid

WilloWisp · Post by **WilloWisp** » Sat Oct 07, 2006 12:37 am

zerodin wrote:Bolder as it a bit more risque, and maybe a plot where the women who usually ends up screwing Candy over(so to speak) ends up being the one with egg on her face(she could be a robot and not know it)

Seconded. In fact, this was exactly the scenario I imagined when I first read the original Candy story.

zerodin · Post by **zerodin** » Sat Oct 07, 2006 1:03 am

Now as a guy who DOES comics on a regular basis I can understand if you don't wanna do this idea, but how about a Candy comic?

fection · Post by **fection** » Sat Oct 07, 2006 6:24 am

Thanks for the tips everyone. I think I've got the makings of 'part one' on the way now (thanks to those who PMed me!).
Sorry, but Camilla's going to stay human. Having her turn out to be a bot would undermine her role as Candy's foil - and I'm not sure how unpredictable a twist that would be, actually...
Also, if 'risque' means sex, chances are that's not going to happen either, sorry.
My tastes are pretty narrow, and unfortunately they involve the fembot staying (mostly) clothed and getting tricked somehow into popping her circuits.
Anyway. Now I've got the basis of part one, I'll see about getting some spare time to write it! It should be a bit more serious, but I still like Camilla's sarcastic tone.
I'm not sure I have enough of the precious spare time to do a Candy comic. I could do a poster for a hypothetical comic, I guess...
Well, cheers again.

zerodin · Post by **zerodin** » Sat Oct 07, 2006 5:41 pm

So basically you're going to make the exact same story again?

Windupdolluver · Post by **Windupdolluver** » Sat Oct 07, 2006 9:29 pm

I've got to go with zerodin on that one fection. I would love to see a Candy comic developed from the first set of stories you have done, or even the idea that was brought about with Camille being exposed as a droid....but like you fection, I've always enjoyed the bimbo style of malfunction scenes that you have created for the 'buxsom bimbo' that some of us have come to fall in love with.

barakuda · Post by **barakuda** » Sun Oct 08, 2006 12:33 am

Why dont you write a story where with several women one might be air headed like candy , another might have the The over endowed figure like canday but seem smarter And Third might act like shes perfect and Camilla cant figure out who the robot is. Mabey she get the egg on her face bye thinking the wrong women is the robot. Has in this senario the reader will be trying o figure out who the robot is.

Barakuda

fection · Post by **fection** » Sun Oct 08, 2006 2:37 am

Hmm..
Well, like I've said, I tend to find that that one thing 'does it for me'. I have tried to come up with different ways of The Malfunction happening (via her remote control, electrocution and 'confusion'). It's coming up with different ways of that happening that's the struggle.
I've tried to alter the stakes from story to story as well. Candy was 'exposed' at a party, and then later on TV when trying to kick start a modelling career - and yes, she even tried to kill Camilla.
Sorry if that's repetitive to people, but that's what I like, unfortunately.
I think the stakes of this new story will be different again, if the outcome a bit predictable.

WilloWisp · Post by **WilloWisp** » Mon Oct 09, 2006 1:00 am

I'll be the devils advocate here. Sure, Fection should definitely write what Fection likes. If the rest of us want something else, there's no problem there. We can just write what we like. Ultimately it comes down to people liking Fection's style, but being either too busy, lazy, or unskilled to write it themselves.

Then again, Fection did ask for ideas, and ideas were provided. Popular ones even. Since no one seems to be getting rich (or even making money in the first place) off of fembot-related stuff, all that's lost is the opportunity to write a slightly more liked story.

Windupdolluver · Post by **Windupdolluver** » Tue Oct 10, 2006 12:59 pm

I've got to go with WillOWisp on this one....

I'm one of those types (along with fection and probably some others) who enjoys the 'malfunctioning' side of our little community or 'NATION' as I like to call it. Maybe we should begin to ask others here what it is that they like about being apart of this 'techno-lust' that we have, and respect that. I know some in the community enjoy transformations, some like the idea of a droid not being all human, but what ever we like, we should all respect that.

I hope you come up with another Candy story fection, and even if it's in the same style of plot line, we who enjoy seeing, hearing, or reading a good malfunction from one of our lovely mechanical ladies will appreciate it.

Keep it up Bro.

gyn2010 · Post by **gyn2010** » Tue Oct 10, 2006 4:24 pm

I don't know... I have some ideas:

1) a Candy (if it must be she) should been fooled around in some other ways than in past stories... I think some "fun" like changing the environment around, hiding items, taking the chair away when she's sitting down. I know You can write it fection, coz You've a talent...
2) I've thought today about why always the android should be fully functional or brake totally... Why not just a part of the android malfunction? Like torso with head or entire upper half, totally blocked in some pose unusual for walking. I don't know just crazy stuff I am thinking about...

But please fection, do it just like You want and just like You can... I'm a big fan of Your stories...

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