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Post by jakeCTom » Fri Sep 29, 2006 2:04 pm

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Ok, I’m trying to start a story possibly. So, tell me how you like it and be gentle :wink:


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I’ve never been to one of these fembot fights before. Everyone at the warehouse talks about them all the time. All it is some guys finding some junk on the side of the road and fighting trash with trash. But my friend Jim told me to come because apparently they are fun to watch. We came to this old abandon building outside of town, and inside there were about 40 people yelling and screaming at the top of their lungs. I made my way to the front squeezing by people throwing beer bottles and cans at what at first seemed to be a woman on the ground. I panicked and grabbed one’s guy’s arm right before he was about to throw his bottle. He yelled in my face with the beer breath “Hey man, that fembot deserved it, she lost bud.” It took me a minute, to realize that it indeed was a fembot, she looked so real. I rushed to the other side of the crowd to get a better look. There she was about 5’4 with brunette hair, and with a weight that looked about 125lbs she was beautiful, even besides her apparent condition. She was lying on her back with her head cocked toward me, almost looking at me. The winner evidently was standing over her with an assortment of wiring and tubes in her hand; she kept on pumping her fist in the air. She looked crazy hardly like a human at all, there were tubes going in and out of her back connected to her arms and legs; evidently to give more power to her extremities definitely she had had some kind of upgrade for this fight. The loser was definitely outmatched. She was probably a companion bot, meant for sex and relationships. I looked again at the loser and noticed where her stomach was a fist sized hole that was exposing wires, and tubes that were espousing a green fluid. I then noticed that her arm was torn off also. She was trying to move but her body wouldn’t let her move to where she wanted. She was looking right at me and was trying to seem like cry for help she kept saying “Help….Malfunction…..Malfunction Help….error.” I almost felt sick in my stomach. The winner then moved to her team of nerds and geeky handlers. The loser was dragged to a door and tossed outside. I asked the guy next to me what would happen to the loser and he said “Well, there just going to throw her away, no use to anybody anymore.” I just couldn’t let that happen, something in me felt that it just wasn’t right. I don’t know much about machines let alone fembots but I’ll fix her, and definitely treat her better than those assholes.

To be continued

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Post by DollSpace » Fri Sep 29, 2006 5:16 pm

Very nice beginning...I'm interested to see where this goes :)

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Post by Trace Venom » Fri Sep 29, 2006 6:59 pm

Me Fancy. Do Continue :)

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Post by jakeCTom » Sat Sep 30, 2006 12:44 am

I'm really not too sure, of course she gets saved but after that I'm kind of drawing a blank..... but I'll give it some time. I'm in college too, so my time is limited :( But I'll try to get some more coming, and my grammer and just plain writing skills need alot of help, but thank you for the encouragment.

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Post by bilbo » Sun Oct 01, 2006 11:30 am

This has the bigginings of a very nice story. Nice start, keep it up...
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