H Is For Heuristic Part 96 - Mind Segment

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MAN, THIS STORY IS AWESOME

Post by blake_sigma » Tue Apr 11, 2006 9:39 am

:( Though one of the best characters died a horrible death (and made my jaw drop and heart stop), you made up for it with this chapter. Tammy may be dead, but her legacy lives on. My only regret is that I wished you would have allowed Tammy to say "I Love You" to Mike for the last time (or something that would make his suffering a lot easier) and give Tammy a piece of mind that her life meant something, rather than her last true memory being that of pure fear. I also loved the way you gave Anya the strength to stand her ground. GO ANYA!!!

Overall, I am missing Tammy already and I wish the best for Anya (and Mike). :cry: :cry: :cry:

KEEP IT COMING :cry:

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