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Post by kb7rky » Tue May 31, 2005 3:36 pm

:shock:

Kish...dude...that's a fantastic piece!

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Post by htb21 » Tue May 31, 2005 6:42 pm

wow, well written and an excellent plot!

I enjoyed it thanks!
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Post by DollSpace » Tue May 31, 2005 7:19 pm

Wow...I really liked that one, but it was so sad... ^^; Very well written, though! Makes me want a sequel, even though it's not really possible hehe...

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Post by ButchyBoy » Tue May 31, 2005 9:20 pm

Sometimes the most intesting of ideas can come from dreams. Excellent story.

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Post by tectile » Wed Jun 01, 2005 5:25 am

Very good and quite unique.
I really enjoyed this story.

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that is really scary

Post by psychojester1978 » Wed Jun 01, 2005 10:38 am

:shock: Believe it or not, that story reminded me of a part of my life where a girl I fell in love with drowned a few monthes later from an accident at the river, I never did tell her how I felt or told her that I was in love with her because the guy she was seeing seemed to make her happy. It is very strange how the whole emotion of trying to smile on the outside to get by your work day when in the inside you feel empty, alone, and somewhat depressed. Man, I must say, that this story really hit it home to me and on top of that this is one excellent story.


Good Work and great dreaming !!!! :D

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WOW!!!! excellent Job Kishin!!!!

Post by ANDROID69 » Fri Jun 03, 2005 5:07 pm

Hey KISHIN, & fellow ASFRain's,
KISHIN my ol friend AWESOME job!!!! This one was freakin excellent!!! I have always been one who loves all your works Kishin. By all means ol' friend keep it up:) You really are one of our greatest writters! PETE#69/ANDROID69
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Post by Baron » Sun Jun 05, 2005 7:01 am

Well done, Kishin.

Echoes what's been preying on my mind since New Years'.
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