- I can't edit my previous post. Past attempts led to a server error, so I gave up on that.
- The original plan was to make a series of slides, kind of like the screens from a dating game. Obviously, that didn't work out, so I gave up partway. What remains of that little experiment are put here for reference as basically a really elaborate brainstorming section
- As for the actual story, I thought it would be a waste to end it with just that one post. There's an ending, but I want to see the journey the two main characters take to get to that point. I'll eventually rewrite the material from this brainstorming session and append them to the original post
- Does every story need a happy ending?



