FYOP - Planet of the Gynoids Edited/Added pages

[robolover69000]

Hello All
Over at Fembot Wiki, I discovered the Follow Your Own Plot site under stories. I found one (incomplete) story called 'Planet of the Gynoids'
Which I took a liking too.

Here is a link to it [url http://www.fembotwiki.com/index.php?tit ... he_Gynoids]

So I decided to try to take my hand and expand upon it, I started from page 6 by adding some choices and links to the new pages [/url http://www.fembotwiki.com/index.php?tit ... noids/0006]

I would like to hear what you think, what I can improve or add. What works, doesn't work. Any suggestions would be helpful. I've got more notes and partial pages writing I just need to complete them.

For example for the Oberon City/State side, I have image it as being A Company town, with the Gynoids as both Employees and Customers for the Company Town. Its ruled by a gynoid know as the Secretary, originally the last human was the CEO as his health was failing he delegated more and more authority to his personal secretary gynoid eventually she assumed all authority when he died and continued running the Company as he had instructed her. He had a vain hope that humans would return to the world and wanted the company up and running when they did. So the Man's goal would be to met 'The Secretary' and have sex with her, becoming her owner and thus the new CEO of Oberon City.

I think I need to add more conflict into the story but not sure were or how to add it.
Too much sex? Not enough sex?
Toying with the idea that at some point he has ah, 'performance' issues.

Also if the guy isn't careful and in a public place gets a large number of gynoids attracted/stimulated he could ended up getting torn apart from a bunch a sex starved gynoids.

Another idea I am toying with is this. Not all of the surviving males where heterosexual, there were a few homosexuals that needed their needs met and a few gay androids were build. Most if not all are in storage, time to time a gynoid will find one and activate to see if she can use it to full fill her desire for sex, but of course the android is not interested.

The guy getting chased by a randy android has some comic potential.

Also in Oberon City, if I can do it right I might be able to working in some 'Dilbert style' office politics.
Let me know what you think.

Robo Lover 69000 the gynoid gynecologist.

PS
If you have a gynoid(or area one) in need of a gynecological exam
I am your man! Reasonable rates, breast exams are always free!

[The Liar]

Well I'm rather liking it.

Then again I started it in the first place, so I might be bias.

I'm thinking of adding a few more installments of my own.

I'm not fond of the gay idea.

[robolover69000]

Well I'm rather liking it.

Then again I started it in the first place, so I might be bias.

I'm thinking of adding a few more installments of my own.

I'm not fond of the gay idea.

Thank you, that is good to hear.
If you like I can send the outline I developed plus some of the unfinished parts that I have if you would like to look them over.

Yeah, I am beginning to have second thoughts on the gay idea too.

Robo Lover 69000 the gynoid gynecologist.

PS
If you have a gynoid(or area one) in need of a gynecological exam
I am your man! Reasonable rates, breast exams are always free!

[The Liar]

Well I'm rather liking it.

Then again I started it in the first place, so I might be bias.

I'm thinking of adding a few more installments of my own.

I'm not fond of the gay idea.

Thank you, that is good to hear.
If you like I can send the outline I developed plus some of the unfinished parts that I have if you would like to look them over.

Yeah, I am beginning to have second thoughts on the gay idea too.

Robo Lover 69000 the gynoid gynecologist.

PS
If you have a gynoid(or area one) in need of a gynecological exam
I am your man! Reasonable rates, breast exams are always free!

Sure