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Ashley is a secret observer spyroid pass it on.
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Anyone wonder if there is more then one Grace? I mean, you get someone to cede the licensing rights to their soul, one would assume a soulless mega corp would seek to optimize it's utility.
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Ahhhh... I think.Uncom wrote:„Dead man‘s switch."The Liar wrote:Anyone wonder if there is more then one Grace? I mean, you get someone to cede the licensing rights to their soul, one would assume a soulless mega corp would seek to optimize it's utility.
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"I look forward to servicing you"
what about
"I look forward to serving you"
suggested by Grammarly
"I look forward to servicing you"
what about
"I look forward to serving you"
suggested by Grammarly
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I think that was deliberate.liliwinnt6 wrote:page 33
"I look forward to servicing you"
what about
"I look forward to serving you"
suggested by Grammarly
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When Ashley makes her introduction, and fights the sisters, they recognize her and clearly have a history... it would make sense if Ashley was a femdroid or a convert or something along those lines.
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Well, since Grace had been severed from the hive mind, I'm assuming her dead man's switch would have gone off.Uncom wrote:So, I'm currently planning and brainstorming ideas for the second... Book? of The Revolution.
I got the base story, so now I'm asking you guys to give me some ideas on what you'd like to see in the next book.
(Hint, The Countess is a European medieval/Ancient Japan-styled character, so Knight-Droids or stuff like that you can suggest.)
I'll release a new chapter in the following weeks or so.
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Reprogram those assassin bots and send them to some reserve secret army!
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excuse me, what does dead man's switch do of Grace? once she was disconnected, what would happen?
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I've never said this until now, but I just love The Revolution. It has a nice story and setting, and good fembot damage to boot. Hope to see more from you, Uncom.
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I really like the new character, Rae - the killing machine.
You're really productive, and you've mentioned you had some exams to pass! Eight chapters so far, my "Uncom" directory already takes 2 GB of space, keep up the great work!
You're really productive, and you've mentioned you had some exams to pass! Eight chapters so far, my "Uncom" directory already takes 2 GB of space, keep up the great work!
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well, i kinda understand that now, thank youUncom wrote:Dead Mans Switches are activated if the attached operator becomes incapacitated, either through death or loss of consciousness. I believe Russia uses this method for their missile-control, meaning should the president be killed in case of a bombing, all missiles in Russia would automatically fire onto their designated targets.liliwinnt6 wrote:excuse me, what does dead man's switch do of Grace? once she was disconnected, what would happen?
So since Grace was disconnected from the hive-mind, all the Grace-clones were activated.
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too bad ashley was killed
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Maybe she'll be brought back in a synthetic form?liliwinnt6 wrote:too bad ashley was killed
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and the empress of the Ugalkortasun is a human?
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We only actually have Chell's word on that; and I'm not sure either her or Valkyrie should be taken at face value.Kishin wrote:I thought she was a robot too
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I'll just say that Clare is the perfect fembot character: fully robotic, yet behaving in a human-like fashion, but exposing her robotic nature from time to time: opening panels, receiving updates. She's also a bit sneaky in satisfying her needs: switching Chell to a submissive mode was a great scene. I hope we get to see more of her being hacked, damaged, repaired, etc. Please just don't kill/destroy her.
As always, looking forward to next episodes of Akaran Archives!
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