Poll: The Revolution - Possible Backstories / Prequels

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Which character introduced in the comic so far would you like to see a prequel-comic of first?

Poll ended at Mon Jun 25, 2018 1:36 pm

Benedict
1
8%
Valentine
0
No votes
Gadget
5
42%
Ashley
0
No votes
Grace / The Order of the New Prophet (The Siren probably also falls into this backstory)
6
50%
 
Total votes: 12

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Poll: The Revolution - Possible Backstories / Prequels

Post by Uncom » Mon Jun 18, 2018 1:36 pm

So, I thought that when I'll eventually get through with the main story of The Revolution, I'll start creating prequels (comic-backstories) of each character.
So I would like to ask you guys and gals which character you would like to see a backstory of first.
I'll probably redo this poll once I've expanded the character-roster.
If I ever do the backstories, I'll (obviously) start with the most popular vote, working my way down to the least popular.

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Post by Lithorien » Mon Jun 18, 2018 5:46 pm

I have a lot of sympathy for the Siren (am sad she's gone, may do a spin-off where she wins if you don't object), so that's my vote for sure.

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Post by ChocolateKeys » Mon Jun 18, 2018 7:00 pm

Will you show the factory where Ashley was manufactured??
English isn't my first language (and still isn't a second...). So, if i commit some mistake, PLEASE inform me.

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Re: Poll: The Revolution - Possible Backstories / Prequels

Post by liliwinnt6 » Tue Sep 18, 2018 8:17 am

Ch. 14:

Page 60
Nyssa, please bring Chell to her prison-cell.

suggestion:
swap "bring" with "escort"

Page 61
Keep moving.

suggestion:
say "Get moving." instead of "Keep moving."
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Re: Poll: The Revolution - Possible Backstories / Prequels

Post by liliwinnt6 » Tue Sep 18, 2018 8:20 am

im interested that how would the real Chell going to be in the future story
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Post by Saya » Tue Sep 18, 2018 1:20 pm

liliwinnt6 wrote:Ch. 14:

Page 60
Nyssa, please bring Chell to her prison-cell.

suggestion:
swap "bring" with "escort"

Page 61
Keep moving.

suggestion:
say "Get moving." instead of "Keep moving."
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Post by Uncom » Tue Sep 18, 2018 1:35 pm

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Post by Saya » Tue Sep 18, 2018 2:13 pm

Uncom wrote: it‘s
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"If the time should ever come when what is now called science, thus familiarized to men, shall be ready to put on, as it were, a form of flesh and blood, the Poet will lend his divine spirit to aid the transfiguration, and will welcome the Being thus produced, as a dear and genuine inmate of the household of man."
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Re: Poll: The Revolution - Possible Backstories / Prequels

Post by liliwinnt6 » Tue Sep 18, 2018 8:08 pm

well, no offense i just wish to have it sound right
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