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The Revolution is great story! I'm already curious what will happen next.
I'm curious when Grace talks about her past life - she's lying? Or she was converted into a femdroid when she entered the order? Or just talking about her previous purpose? But the latter badly complies with "selling our bodies to survive", as I think.
It seemed to me that she was honest, especially on page 32 when she tries to convince Benedict. Although, it is probably difficult to distinguish her honesty as a person and when she follows her programming.
I'm curious when Grace talks about her past life - she's lying? Or she was converted into a femdroid when she entered the order? Or just talking about her previous purpose? But the latter badly complies with "selling our bodies to survive", as I think.
It seemed to me that she was honest, especially on page 32 when she tries to convince Benedict. Although, it is probably difficult to distinguish her honesty as a person and when she follows her programming.
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Thanks! Now I'll wait for the next chapters with even more curiosity!
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hey, i would like to see Gadget the cyborg girl do something on the captured enemy droids, may i have that please?
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When making a new topic, there is a tab at the bottom of the screen next to the options tab that will let you make a poll.Uncom wrote:A new chapter has been released.
http://fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=U ... pter_Three
The fate of Grace is in your hands, guys.
I'll let you decide her fate when I figure out how to create a poll. (I'm a noob when it comes to forums.)
Until then, enjoy.
(Also quick update, starting next Saturday, I'll be on vacation for two weeks. So no new chapters or manips during those two weeks.)
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what about doing a fully disassemble on her, put her back together, do a lots of diagnostics and test, and reprogram her to be submissiveUncom wrote:A new chapter has been released.
http://fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=U ... pter_Three
The fate of Grace is in your hands, guys.
I'll let you decide her fate when I figure out how to create a poll. (I'm a noob when it comes to forums.)
Until then, enjoy.
(Also quick update, starting next Saturday, I'll be on vacation for two weeks. So no new chapters or manips during those two weeks.)
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I also like this idea, although I would prefer to reprogram her as an ally rather than as a submissive unit.liliwinnt6 wrote: what about doing a fully disassemble on her, put her back together, do a lots of diagnostics and test, and reprogram her to be submissive
And about Ashley, who "Not actually a Machina, though"... If robotization is possible in this world, then they has a chance to fix it. =)
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maybe we can make her change her mind (to persuade her) rather than "just" reprogram herMortisX wrote:I also like this idea, although I would prefer to reprogram her as an ally rather than as a submissive unit.liliwinnt6 wrote: what about doing a fully disassemble on her, put her back together, do a lots of diagnostics and test, and reprogram her to be submissive
And about Ashley, who "Not actually a Machina, though"... If robotization is possible in this world, then they has a chance to fix it. =)
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I like this idea even more! But I still do not mind diagnostics and tests for her...liliwinnt6 wrote: maybe we can make her change her mind (to persuade her) rather than "just" reprogram her
I like it if good gynoids win )
And I still want to hear a story about her past.
I really really hope to hear that she was transformed into a femdroid and served a Siren because she really believed that this was the best way. And that turning into a robots makes people only better. ^_^
And after the happy end, when they defeat Siren, she will push Ashley into the robotizer so she can see the fidelity of this point of view and share this happiness.
But, of course, the author knows better how it was.
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you mean making a flesh human into a robot? if the target is not volunteered, i would not like it as wellUncom wrote:I‘ll just let you all know that I really dislike robotization.
So it will most likely not occur.
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Well, nanobots actually seem technically unlikely. Copy or transfer of personality look more real.Uncom wrote:liliwinnt6 wrote: Just robotization in general. The whole idea of nanobots magically turning skin tissue into plastic and organs into circuits seems absurd to me.
And „Robocop-types“ seem more cyborg than robot to me.
I‘m more into robot-duplicates simulating the lives of the original person.
And, of course, everyone has their own preferences. In any case, thanks for your great story and look forward to continuing!
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yep, i'm with both you guysMortisX wrote:Well, nanobots actually seem technically unlikely. Copy or transfer of personality look more real.Uncom wrote:liliwinnt6 wrote: Just robotization in general. The whole idea of nanobots magically turning skin tissue into plastic and organs into circuits seems absurd to me.
And „Robocop-types“ seem more cyborg than robot to me.
I‘m more into robot-duplicates simulating the lives of the original person.
And, of course, everyone has their own preferences. In any case, thanks for your great story and look forward to continuing!
btw, thank you for your stories and looking forward for new chapters, too
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i'm sorry to tell you but these pages could be missing, these are:
Page 40, 26, 16 and 13
Page 40, 26, 16 and 13
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thank you very much
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