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Post by Stephaniebot » Thu Jul 05, 2007 12:56 pm

I'll be honest as everyone knows where my preferences lay anyway.
I'm happy to help proofread any human transformation type robot stories that may come along, though I can only do much at weekends.
Created robot stories arent really my scene though, so not really so keen to help out with those. I will if someone asks nicely, but dont expect them to rank high in my priorities.
I'm just a 'girl' who wants to become a fembot whats wrong with that?

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Post by xerxes31415 » Thu Jul 05, 2007 2:06 pm

Yeah, that's a good point to bring up. I'm totally open to proofread any type of story with any genders involved.

Also, I think this thread would be useful to authors, so I say it should be changed to a Sticky post (If Possible).

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Post by BA2 » Fri Jul 06, 2007 5:12 am

Hi,

I'd be delighted to proof read for anyone who thinks I could add anything from spelling & grammar to ideas and detail if required. Just pm me (T-G stuff not really my thing though).

I'd love to be writing myself and have ideas aplenty but it just takes so damned long to do them justice on the page that I can't find the time!

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Post by RancidInsanity » Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:06 pm

Hey I need some opinions. And I encourage you to be as brutally honest as you can possible be, Are my stories worth reading? Do you think they're good enough to "make the grade"?

and don't worry about hurting my feelings or anything. :wink:

Thanks.
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Post by noidguy » Sat Jul 07, 2007 9:50 am

I's a good speeler and even more betterer with the grammer, but I gonna leave the proofreeding to uthers.

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I'll be happy to proofread and critique anyone's stories.

Post by DrFranklin » Sun Jul 15, 2007 12:18 pm

hmm. shouldn't have hit return on the subject line.

send me the story to my FC mailbox if you want to proofread beforehand,
or notify me with a link after posting to the story section.

I can also be reached as

robospierre on Y! messenger

and

robospierre on IMVU 3d avatar messaging.

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Post by Brytestar » Sat Jan 05, 2008 10:19 pm

I'm starting to write more because I'm hoping for more RP oppourtunities myself. never got any feedback :(

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Post by gynoneko » Sun Nov 07, 2010 6:05 pm

How can we get our stories posted on the wiki site, and in the Story Archive? I have the ones I posted on here, and most people seem to like it, and I am writing others I hope to post here soon. I was hoping I could get them on the wiki as well.
Thanks!

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Post by gynoneko » Sun Nov 07, 2010 9:15 pm

You already gave me one last week ;)

I've tried to add mine now, but I'm not sure I did it all right. Can you please check and make sure I didn't mess anything up. Not sure I got the category in there, and it seems GynoNeko has no page either.

Thanks!

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Post by Karel » Thu Jun 14, 2012 6:21 pm

RancidInsanity wrote:Hey I need some opinions. And I encourage you to be as brutally honest as you can possible be, Are my stories worth reading? Do you think they're good enough to "make the grade"?

and don't worry about hurting my feelings or anything. :wink:

Thanks.
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Re: The Story Board

Post by Fembotfan415 » Wed Oct 17, 2012 1:40 pm

Is there a board where you can post ideas for stories?

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Re: The Story Board

Post by Fembotfan415 » Tue Oct 30, 2012 2:47 pm

some make a story about a malfunctioning tara strong for bronies like me

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Post by minkwheel » Wed Oct 31, 2012 12:21 am

Great Googly Moogly! --I've MET Tara! --she's extreeeeemly nice!!! (I know a lot of voiceover artists, because I'm a cartoonist) ---we're a close knit group. You have GOOD TASTE, my friend. --minkwheel.
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Post by DollSpace » Thu Nov 01, 2012 1:52 pm

gynoneko wrote:How can we get our stories posted on the wiki site, and in the Story Archive? I have the ones I posted on here, and most people seem to like it, and I am writing others I hope to post here soon. I was hoping I could get them on the wiki as well.
Thanks!
Hi, as moderator of the Story Archive, I apologise for not being on top of things... I moved twice and have had lots of malfunctions...and now I can barely get out of bed, so I'm sorry I've been way too slow putting stuff in the story archive. That, and the fact that I just lost my entire iMac, and with it, all the stories I assembled there, and word is still out on whether or not I can get them back. Putting stuff on the Wiki is the best solution now, but things may change. Oh, and Robotman, I need an account there, too, I think!

Thanks!

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Post by DollSpace » Thu Nov 01, 2012 1:54 pm

minkwheel wrote:Great Googly Moogly! --I've MET Tara! --she's extreeeeemly nice!!! (I know a lot of voiceover artists, because I'm a cartoonist) ---we're a close knit group. You have GOOD TASTE, my friend. --minkwheel.
That's awesome..I actually aspire to be a voice-over artist. I've already done some local advertisements and public service announcements. Once my iMac is fixed I also have to do some voicework for Fection, but until then, if you want to hear my voice, I have an MP3 of my PSA for a local charity I work for. :) And Tara seems like she'd be awesome. I'd also love to meet Cree Summer (who voiced Penny in "Inspector Gadget" and so many other characters in other franchises).

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Re: The Story Board

Post by minkwheel » Thu Nov 01, 2012 2:10 pm

If you really want to hear about how the voiceover industry works.... and if you just want to hear some of your favorite v.o. artists ramble and tell very cool stories.... look into ROB PAULSEN'S 'TALKIN' TOONS podcasts .... they're on every week, and yes, TARA has been interviewed.... Rob is a very nice guy, and does voiceover workshops like DAWS BUTLER did. (Rob is Yakko Warner, Carl Wheezer, PINKY, The Mask, Arthur from THE TICK, (many more) --and his newest gig is DONATELLO on Nickelodeon's new NINJA TURTLES series.
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Post by DollSpace » Fri Nov 02, 2012 5:10 am

minkwheel wrote:If you really want to hear about how the voiceover industry works.... and if you just want to hear some of your favorite v.o. artists ramble and tell very cool stories.... look into ROB PAULSEN'S 'TALKIN' TOONS podcasts .... they're on every week, and yes, TARA has been interviewed.... Rob is a very nice guy, and does voiceover workshops like DAWS BUTLER did. (Rob is Yakko Warner, Carl Wheezer, PINKY, The Mask, Arthur from THE TICK, (many more) --and his newest gig is DONATELLO on Nickelodeon's new NINJA TURTLES series.
Awesome, I'll definitely check it out. I've had this, obsession, I guess you could call it, to become a voice-over artist or a voice actress or both or whatever, since I don't know how long. I appreciate all the help I can get! :) And you can always ask me for a voice, but I have to make sure that my microphone is set up and that I'm used to using Garage Band to put together a demo or something, cos I already promised Kishin awhile ago I'd do some voices for him, too, but I seem to be confused on how the program works. Anyways, after my iMac crashed, I get it back today or tomorrow, so I'll work on it then, and try to finalise the voices for Kishin's animation, too. Oh, and I'm aware of Rob Paulsen; I think I may have been at a con where he was a guest or something. Does he do DJ work, too, or am I thinking of someone else?

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Post by Fembotfan415 » Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:44 pm

if someone makes the story about the malfunctioning tara strong send it to me right away. and if it is made i will go yay.

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Post by Robjoe » Mon Nov 12, 2012 12:22 am

Fembotfan415: Have you considered commissioning someone? You'd have better luck if you offered an incentive with your request, I imagine.

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Re: The Story Board

Post by Fembotfan415 » Fri Nov 16, 2012 7:33 pm

I could care less as long as the story is well written.

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Post by Hayley Anachronism » Sun Apr 07, 2013 6:40 pm

Are cyborg stories welcome here too? Or bots only?
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Re: The Story Board

Post by dale coba » Sun Apr 07, 2013 7:37 pm

I'm not even sure what FC thinks about cyborgs, because there are at least three kinds:
  • 1) Bionic, human brain
    2) Terminator, no human brain + no personhood/sentience
    3) Cyborg, no human brain + self-aware "person"
I mean, is Cameron a cyborg, or simply a robot wearing a girl for a dress?

Type three doesn't come up much, where the brain is replaced but other flesh is kept, and also personhood is retained. Some strange circumstances there.

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Post by gynoneko » Sun Apr 07, 2013 8:12 pm

The way I differentiate cyborgs is a little different. I like to think of it like this...

Robot - Machine body, Computer brain
Human - Human body, Human brain
Cyborg (classic) - Human body with Machine parts, Human brain
Bionoid/bionic - Organic engineered body, Organic engineered or Robotic brain
Full Body Cyborg - Human brain, Machine body

All of these are acceptable to me, and you will find them in my stories also. I have several cyborgs in my current story (Corrupted), but also robots and full body cyborgs. I think the one thing I haven't yet done is a bionoid, but I do have ideas for them as well, in fact, it is a plot point for the sequel to Exo Saves the Day, whenever I get around to it.
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Post by A.N.N. » Tue Apr 23, 2013 6:51 am

I'm of a similar mind to gynoneko.

The skin job terminators are a rarity (even in the Terminator universe), and in a strict interpretation are cyborgs (as a mix), but in any kind of practical sense they are really just robots with, as Dale said much better than me, wearing some organic skin material. It's not even clear if the skin is human, or just organic based. I think the only practical cyborg in the Terminator movieverse is the Marcus Wright character in Salvation. As I recall he was about a 50/50 mix.

The Cyborg movies kind of get the terminology messed up, since all the cyborgs (except for the first one) are really robots (sentient or otherwise). But I still enjoy them, at least the first 2 movies.

REGARDLESS, I enjoy stories about all the above. Cyborg, robot, bionic, bioroid, etc. bring 'em on! :thumbsup:
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Re: The Story Board

Post by Hayley Anachronism » Thu May 02, 2013 7:03 pm

Working on a cyborg story but feeling a bit shy...a revenge story, really, loosely inspired by Starcraft. Any words of encouragement out there?
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