Soccer-Mom Unit - 23 - Grasp

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Postby GZ02 » Fri Dec 29, 2006 5:23 pm

Nah, sounds like that's already been done. :wink:

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Postby valtech1218 » Mon Jan 01, 2007 12:34 am

great work robotman the story was awesome

any chance of a spin off????

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Postby Robotman » Mon Jan 01, 2007 4:00 am

Probably not. :( This kind of story is just too gloomy for me to write more of.

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Postby rs5420 » Mon Jan 01, 2007 9:46 pm

Robotman, i took an opportunity to strech a side story inside of your story, tell me if you like it. 8)

Brad was enjoying his little break from reality that night. He and Khaled played some pool and threw money into the jukebox to hear songs they could have heard on the radio for free. The alcohol had thinned out his blood and acted like an analgesic on his body and his mind. In his drunken haze, he found himself stealing longer and more frequent glances at that cute blonde barmaid.

She was dressed to enjoy the weather and to increase the amount of cash she got in tips. The shape of her figure lent itself quite well to that, but Brad knew it wouldn't be right to look too much at the curves she seemed all too eager to display. Khaled said, "forget about her, Brad, she's really not your type, unless you like doing it with a toaster or something". Brad was still undressing the waitress with his eyes, pourred a distracted answer to Khaled "What are you talking about?". Khaled pointed the barmaid with his thumb, looking at Brad "Did you ever had a discussion with her?". He declined by a faith sign of his head "No, why?". Khaled continued "Because you would know that she's just one of those new robots we now see everywhere". Brad laughed "You're kidding me, right?" he faced Khaled to see his eyes, and he knew he wasn't joking.

Brad called the barmaid and simply asked her "excuse me miss, may i ask you a personnal question?". The barmaid came over and smiled to Brad "Yes, what's for your service?" pushing her long hairs on her back. Brad took his courage and let go the stupid question "are you a robot?" and taking a dumb look in case she's going to be pissed off by the question. She paused for a moment, and looked like she didn't understood the question. She finally let go after seconds that seemed to last minutes "what is letting you think that i could be a robot, mister?" and she was waiting an answer. Brad took a sip on his beer before finding the rest of dignity deep inside of him to answer "I don't know, maybe your perfect skin tone? To be honest, i think you look too good to be true." now the beer was helping. The barmaid said "Fine, i'll take a break, we'll have a chat." and she served other customers to be sure that they now have everything they'll need for the next 15 minutes.

She came back and took a relaxed pose as she sat next to the two guys. She started back "I don't know who started the rumors about me, but if i find out, he or she better leave the planet". Brad took note of the angry expression of the barmaid "So you're not?". The immediate answer "Of course not! i'm for real". Khaled raised from his chair "Enough of the preprogramed bullcrap, she's a robot, look at this..." and he inserted his little finger into the girl's left ear. She immediately froze still. "They are all the same, this is her pause button, it's usefull when you're f*cking with one and you want to have your climax all alone" Khaled smiled, amused. Brad in quite a shock said "Let's get out of here, before someone notice what you have done to her". Khaled in a relaxed mood said "Don't worry pal, that didn't do any dammages, and she will unpause herself automaticly after 3 minutes". Brad was now leaving the beautiful robot barmaid where she was standing and followed Khaled outside "How did you find out about her being a robot?" "I saw her into a model catalog, identical, up to the single eyelash, and most of the waitresses are too". Brad tried a bit of second hand philosophy "Man, the day where we won't be able to tell if we are f*cking with a real or a robot, we will be doomed!"

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Postby Robotman » Tue Jan 02, 2007 2:20 am

Doomed! ha ha. :lol:
Pretty neat take on the story rs5420, but to be honest I was never sure myself if that barmaid was a robot or just a little ditzy. :wink:

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Postby KernalGovernor101 » Fri Feb 02, 2018 5:59 pm

Really good story Rman! Hoping you could potentially write a prequel to this, perhaps how Brad and Pam (a less advanced version given the fact that they met a year ago) first met and go from there....
Keep up the excellent work!

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Re: Soccer-Mom Unit - 23 - Grasp

Postby Robotman » Fri Feb 02, 2018 6:22 pm

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :)

Unfortunately, not only has it been more than a decade since I wrote this story, but I've got problems writing long "epic" stories (as Kishin describes them) like this now due to chronic migraine. I don't think I could reconstruct the relationships between those characters properly after all this time anyway.

But don't worry, there is something special that I'm working on. ;)

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Postby KernalGovernor101 » Fri Feb 02, 2018 7:28 pm

Thanks Rman. I have been a long time reader and i find your method of writing inspired compared to others (like a 9.9/10 compared to 9.7/10). From story development to the little details, this story was really great. I cant wait for your next story!

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Postby Robotman » Fri Feb 02, 2018 7:41 pm

Thanks again. :)

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Postby liliwinnt6 » Fri Feb 09, 2018 6:05 am

btw, i prefer chapter 20, very detailed descriptions, very robotic
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