I'll see what I can do. There are some other long-running (read: delayed) projects in my queue that I'd like to finish now that I'm back in the writing mood. However, the relatively enthusiastic response to this story means I'm more likely to try to write a sequel, or perhaps simply other stuff in a similar vein.Guderian34 wrote:Also please let there be a part 2 and maybe pics it's the Christmas season you know
In the future I'd like to focus on less simplistic plots, mainly to give myself a little narrative room to have fun with the characters, but without also bloating up the length too much from the short-storyish standard that I think is most comfortable for erotic fiction.
With regards to pictures, Anika was very loosely inspired by a reference picture. I can try to dig it up if you like.
As another, more general point, I'm very interested in detailed critique from anyone willing to offer any. What worked? What didn't? What would you like to have seen more or less of?
Writers improve by only two means: experience and criticism. I have little of the former but even less of the latter. If something struck you, please feel free to say so. Comments like Saya's and DZiegler's are very helpful, just as much for the analysis, which helps me write better, as the praise, which encourages me to write more. However, criticism that tells me what I can improve upon is if anything even more valuable than that which tells me what I'm currently doing right.
