Mina's Lament (comic... Kinda)

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Mina's Lament (comic... Kinda)

Post by The Liar » Wed Apr 19, 2017 7:13 pm

Edit: minor edits made; corrected tense and participle errors, and restored the final paragraph of page 6, which I had accidentally cut off.

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Re: Mina's Lament (comic... Kinda)

Post by --NightBattery-- » Wed Apr 19, 2017 7:51 pm

that was very cute and sexseh.

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Post by Stephaniebot » Wed Apr 19, 2017 11:33 pm

I need someone to do that to me, for real
I'm just a 'girl' who wants to become a fembot whats wrong with that?

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Post by liliwinnt6 » Thu Apr 20, 2017 4:24 am

well done, but I would like to know where did you find those female figures, thanks
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Post by The Liar » Thu Apr 20, 2017 5:04 am

liliwinnt6 wrote:well done, but I would like to know where did you find those female figures, thanks
Taimanin Yukikaze 2

http://hcgc.ru/taimanin-yukikaze-2/#more-58415

Word of warning, it is a Lilith game, which means beautiful character sprites and drawing style, but utterly horrifying context for events. This was admittedly one of the more salvageable.
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Post by liliwinnt6 » Thu Apr 20, 2017 7:58 am

The Liar wrote:
liliwinnt6 wrote:well done, but I would like to know where did you find those female figures, thanks
Taimanin Yukikaze 2

http://hcgc.ru/taimanin-yukikaze-2/#more-58415

Word of warning, it is a Lilith game, which means beautiful character sprites and drawing style, but utterly horrifying context for events. This was admittedly one of the more salvageable.
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Post by TheShoveller » Thu Apr 20, 2017 3:36 pm

Sounds like some of... crap, I think it's Sei Shoujo's stuff? Like, decent art and characters, but the actual game CGs are kinda... well, don't look at them unless you know what you're getting into.

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Post by TheTraveller » Fri Apr 21, 2017 7:23 pm

You deserve some serious applause for your work here. *standing ovation*

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Post by ChocolateKeys » Mon Jun 12, 2017 3:12 pm

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