The History of Fembot Evolution (According to Me)

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The History of Fembot Evolution (According to Me)

Post by txsailor47 » Sat Aug 06, 2016 6:44 am

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Post by 1001011001 » Sat Aug 06, 2016 9:41 am

Off to a good start!

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Post by --NightBattery-- » Sat Aug 06, 2016 11:33 am

I believe it will be quite similar in real life eventually since big industry doesn't take any kind of risks these days.

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Post by Erntoron » Sat Aug 06, 2016 2:07 pm

A fairly fresh take on the creation of fembots! Love it!

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Post by txsailor47 » Sat Aug 06, 2016 3:03 pm

Chapter 2

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Post by Murotsu » Sat Aug 06, 2016 4:39 pm

Not a bad storyline at all.

The writing could use a little clean up, something a second or third pass edit would solve.

I'd love to see better technical details myself, but that's the sort of OCD person I am... :D

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Post by txsailor47 » Sat Aug 06, 2016 5:13 pm

Thanks, I appreciate all comments, the good, the bad and the ugly :shock: :lol: 8)

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Post by zerodin » Sat Aug 06, 2016 6:00 pm

Loving it so far.

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Post by txsailor47 » Wed Aug 10, 2016 3:39 pm

Chapter 3

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Post by Stephaniebot » Wed Aug 10, 2016 10:36 pm

Its a super series, I must say. Still hoping at some point that management, or the bots might go rogue, and try turning a human into a robot, mind
I'm just a 'girl' who wants to become a fembot whats wrong with that?

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Post by Brytestar » Thu Aug 11, 2016 6:09 am

Um I believe that the pics need resizing I can't read the whole story. :(
Sometimes you just gotta look at the Bryte side!

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Post by --NightBattery-- » Thu Aug 11, 2016 6:53 am

Maybe you are using a very small computer?

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Post by Brytestar » Thu Aug 11, 2016 2:46 pm

Ok R-Man I'll try that.
Sometimes you just gotta look at the Bryte side!

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Post by txsailor47 » Fri Aug 12, 2016 3:11 am

Thanks for the feedback everyone, it motivates me to continue. All of these images are also posted o the Wiki if that makes it easier to see the whole image.

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