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Re: Checked items

Postby --Battery-- » Thu Jun 09, 2016 2:34 am

That’s right Boo. Attention is nice, and addictive, but you should stick to your interests or you will never please yourself.
But if you ever need opinions, alternate ideas or some complaining to do, PM any moment you want! I hope I can count on you too.

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Re: Checked items

Postby Saya » Thu Jun 09, 2016 12:03 pm

Very nice! Simple, but sexy. It's awesome to see you expand your talents into writing, Boo! : D But yeah, I would love to see more of Holly and robots like her, and more of them in pieces, to be honest. Hehe.
"If the time should ever come when what is now called science, thus familiarized to men, shall be ready to put on, as it were, a form of flesh and blood, the Poet will lend his divine spirit to aid the transfiguration, and will welcome the Being thus produced, as a dear and genuine inmate of the household of man."
- William Wordsworth

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Re: Checked items

Postby evil_boo » Thu Jun 09, 2016 3:04 pm

Me too Saya...me too.

That said I think i have that weird writing itch again since I've stalled on manips. We'll see what happens next!

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Re: Checked items

Postby CodyDoyle34 » Sun Jun 12, 2016 10:04 am

Loved the story. And the end is unexpected and I'd say perfect.
Keep going!

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Re: Checked items

Postby liliwinnt6 » Sun Jun 12, 2016 11:00 am

maybe we may change the method into some sexier way deactivating any uncooperative sleeper units
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Re: Checked items

Postby Kishin » Sun Jun 12, 2016 11:51 am

Taking them apart seems to be pretty damned effective.
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Re: Checked items

Postby xerxes31415 » Sun Jun 12, 2016 12:52 pm

Very nice story boo!

I'd definitely second the notion that you should write about whatever interests you.

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Re: Checked items

Postby evil_boo » Mon Jun 13, 2016 5:32 am

Oh believe me i thought of sexier ways of deactivating dleepers...but sticking with the concept of writing shorter stories in order to get them to the finish line..i simply didnt have time to write it out.

Besides, there was a plane to catch :-D

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Re: Checked items

Postby evil_boo » Mon Jun 13, 2016 2:47 pm

If it meant getting left behind to play with sexy robots...i might intentionally miss it

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Re: Checked items

Postby liliwinnt6 » Tue Jun 14, 2016 6:40 am

Kishin wrote:Taking them apart seems to be pretty damned effective.


those sleepers with filter protocols activated (read virus alert series for details :thumbsup: )
Fellas, you may address me as Boris, my ID could be troublesome for you to call me.
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