Honest V.I.C.I. Diaries Question From A True Fan

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Re: Honest V.I.C.I. Diaries Question From A True Fan

Post by australopith » Mon May 02, 2016 10:48 am

I can't speak from experience in reading a majority of the stories–but from what I've read, allow me to speak in their favor. For me, Vicki is more a self-insertion character than a turn-on type (...well, except literally!), so I have no problem with her being a Small Wonder homage or not involved in a large number of slashy situations.

Perhaps my needs for the latter in the series have somewhat been filled by Brittney Delacroix, whose nerve, agency, bossiness and bent for high living fascinate me. I would obviously like to see more of her (once she's... er, back in working order) and admittedly wouldn't mind seeing her in some sensual or even romantic situations. But I don't want to force those on the series, either. (Dwelling on the archrival in a legitimate romance would seem to take us away from the hero a lot.)

It takes all kinds to fill a forum, and I like the V.I.C.I. Diaries series!

(And... I hope to get back to my own collaborations with Propman soon! My health and work issues are still eating most of my time...)

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Post by darkbutflashy » Mon May 02, 2016 11:45 am

I wrote this before, I think: I usually don't comment on stories. Because I'm picky and even for the stories I like, I find things I don't like and I have a strong opinion on it. So... I don't comment on stories unless the author wants brutally honest feedback.

And that even though my own writing is similar to that of the Duke, I think. My ongoing story is not exactly about having sex with a robot, but about cyborg/robot women who are somewhat odd but fascinating and attractive and, in a way, sexy. And I also think it gets not enough feedback here.

But hey, okay. I released it here/fembotwiki because I like cyborg/robot women and this seemed to be the right place to do so. I know there are many readers here, if not the most, who want smut. Plain porn. That's okay, too, it's just I cannot deliver. I don't want this story to be filled with porn. I want the women in the story be better cyborgs/robots than just exotic porn actors. There has too be room for such stories and I bet it is.

I wrote this before, I think: as an author, you write for yourself. Because you want to drive the story further. Because you want to explore that inner universe of yours which creates these stories. The readers, they come second. Their praise, it's a hail of candy thrown at you when you're already stuffed from having done the thing.

Duke, maybe it makes you happier to write shorter stories. That way you get the feeling you have accomplished something, which is most rewarding.
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Post by --NightBattery-- » Mon May 02, 2016 4:38 pm

What, it's vicky from small wonder?!
whaaaaat

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Post by RoxxyRobofox » Mon May 02, 2016 6:53 pm

If this topic really was posted without Duke's previous knowledge, then I feel it's highly unfair to criticize what he is writing here because someone else said something about it. It feels like he's being dragged into a debate he didn't start and I don't think it's fair to sit here and talk about 'calling down the lightning' on a story when Duke isn't the one asking on people's opinions.

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Post by Gorgo » Tue May 03, 2016 7:13 am

I have to agree with DarkRexx on this one. There's always the chats that contain the chapters of Duke's stories where you can make comments.
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Post by DollSpace » Tue May 03, 2016 9:22 am

:oops: I did actually post it in the comment section of one of the installments of "Broken" but few of the other installments had any comments, so I just posted it as its own topic. I didn't know I'd cause so much trouble, but every once in awhile I do tend to put my foot in my mouth, so I apologise to everyone for that.

I'm sorry.

And that embarassed smilie looks damn smug...sorry, not my intention...

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