Scenario Chamber - FYOP (Classroom Update)

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by LongTimeLurker » Wed Feb 10, 2016 1:25 am

Kishin wrote:Could also do... A Wasteland scenario (ala Furiosa), Zombie Apocalypse

I'll combine these two into a robot apocalypse... IMO, zombie robots are sexier than robot zombies ;)
Kishin wrote:(though obviously the hero has to survive),
When I started this, I intended to have a few "you died" pages (and I think there's still one in there I should take out). But since I'm not able to save a game-status, I've been trying to limit their use.

No game status also means it's impossible to track the number of cores a player has collected, so I'll eventually need to put in a "I've finished" link... or figure out how to use that program Dale linked back in the beginning.
Kishin wrote:or mundane tropes like the Boss Lady.
I love the classics!

Now on the board we have:
* Late Night at the Office
* Robot apocalypse

I should have content for the Witch & Warrior scenario soon.

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by Extyr » Thu Feb 25, 2016 5:51 pm

It's nice that you're continueing that story.

I couldn't help but imagine that the warrior looked like that picture: http://g.e-hentai.org/s/78bdd0cda7/883829-3

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by Epitaph » Fri Feb 26, 2016 2:43 pm

Now this is a thorough pleasure to explore. Both options so far are homeruns in my book, I must say. Two thumbs up to you, LongTimeLurker!

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by LongTimeLurker » Sat Feb 27, 2016 1:08 am

Thanks!
Extyr wrote:I couldn't help but imagine that the warrior looked like that picture: http://g.e-hentai.org/s/78bdd0cda7/883829-3
Wow, she makes the Dragon's Crown Amazon look reasonably proportioned :shock:

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Post by xerxes31415 » Sat Feb 27, 2016 2:25 am

Very fun story. Thanks for writing it. ☺

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Post by BluePhoenixx » Wed Mar 09, 2016 2:02 pm

I can, without a doubt, say that I find this form of second-person writing absolutely delightful!
Is there a way that several people can edit these things?

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by darkbutflashy » Wed Mar 09, 2016 7:17 pm

You have to ask Robotman for a Wiki account. Then, you can edit all the pages as you like.
Do you like or dislike my ongoing story Battlemachine Ayako? Leave a comment on the story's discussion pages on the wiki or in that thread. Thank you!

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Post by MalcfunctionCrazyfor » Thu Mar 10, 2016 6:45 pm

Although, and I apologize if I'm speaking out of line here, I'd ask the original author for approval of any edits of the material. LTL's material is top notch, and puts a lot of effort into it.
Just a recommendation.

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by LongTimeLurker » Fri Mar 11, 2016 8:20 am

Thanks for the kind words!

I encourage anyone to edit-in suggestions (on the suggestions page, as I won't see it otherwise).

If you have your own idea for a chamber to develop, go right ahead! I only ask that you put your account name in the chamber title / link to get credit.

If you want to tweak / add to something that's already there, just let me know on the suggestions page (no need if it's just typos / grammar fixes).

In all cases (as darkbutflashy mentioned) Robotman is the one to contact for an account.

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by Epitaph » Fri Mar 11, 2016 10:00 am

What would you think of a scenario where you've stepped into an opera production?

So victorian-esque dress, with perhaps a little steampunk/gothic elements mixed in for flavour; plenty of hammy, somewhat glitchy acting; some cliches about revenge or star-crossed love. Perhaps a emphasis on keeping within the parameters of the scenario or else the whole production falls apart,- making discretion a key part of getting the cores to contrast the action of 'the Witch and the Warrior'?

It'd have to NOT be Coppelia, though as that's a ballet, and secondly, a little overdone as an example of a fembot on stage. Perhaps 'Rigoletto',- or 'Roboletta',- or a highly condensed version of either 'Turandot' or 'Madame Butterfly', which would allow for a little Asian dress to spice things up?

(I'm happy to try some of the writing for this option, but I'm terrible when it comes to figuring my way around how to input things into the site. LongTimeLurker, might you be up to giving me a hand with this if I were to send you a snippet or two?)

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by LongTimeLurker » Sat Mar 12, 2016 8:35 am

I think an opera would be great! I'd throw out Cosi fan tutte and Don Giovanni as possibilities as well.

PM me a snippet, I'll get it set up.

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Post by Epitaph » Sun Mar 13, 2016 5:21 am

Give me till Wednesday to bounce around a few ideas for how to set things up, and then I'll send them to you for evaluation? :)

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by LongTimeLurker » Thu Feb 15, 2018 1:44 am

A new scenario: A Night at the Opera (co-written with Epitaph)

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by liliwinnt6 » Wed Feb 21, 2018 12:21 pm

i guess i found something not right for the "Girl Next Door" scenario

if you took the core just from Amber, how do you end up at this line:
"You pry the cores from the two defunct sex-droids and exit the scenario chamber."
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Post by liliwinnt6 » Wed Feb 21, 2018 7:37 pm

I'm saving the stories every storyline (preferred) for a single txt file, guess my head would explode in the future :twisted:
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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by liliwinnt6 » Wed Feb 21, 2018 8:49 pm

Error saving story: The Witch and the Warrior
Too many branches
Unit Boris cannot continue
Overheat detected!
Taking a break is required
Boris will now take a break ...
System cooling down ...
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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by australopith » Sat Feb 24, 2018 2:23 am

LongTimeLurker wrote:A new scenario: A Night at the Opera (co-written with Epitaph)
I think I'm in love with the Stage Manager, and I don't care who knows it... :lovestruck:

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by Epitaph » Sat Feb 24, 2018 4:54 am

australopith wrote:
LongTimeLurker wrote:A new scenario: A Night at the Opera (co-written with Epitaph)
I think I'm in love with the Stage Manager, and I don't care who knows it... :lovestruck:
She's incredible :D

Both of her endings are gold, LongTimeLurker!

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by australopith » Sat Feb 24, 2018 5:48 am

Epitaph wrote:Both of her endings are gold, LongTimeLurker!
I swear I'll fix her, dammit, now that I've won her over. :lovestruck: And take her home where she will be the snarky perfectionist I simply need managing my life–when we're not busy having amazing fun, and when she's not working her new job at a real theatre.

She'll still suspect I'm secretly a robot, and will be annoyed to know she's one... having lived her entire life as a sleeper, she'll have no idea how to program herself, which since she's a perfectionist will bug her without cease. :D

(Hmm, it may bug her that IRL I've already got a girlfriend. Gulp.)

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by Epitaph » Sat Feb 24, 2018 5:55 am

australopith wrote:
Epitaph wrote:Both of her endings are gold, LongTimeLurker!
I swear I'll fix her, dammit, now that I've won her over. :lovestruck: And take her home where she will be the snarky perfectionist I simply need managing my life–when we're not busy having amazing fun, and when she's not working her new job at a real theatre.

She'll still suspect I'm secretly a robot, and will be annoyed to know she's one... having lived her entire life as a sleeper, she'll have no idea how to program herself, which since she's a perfectionist will bug her without cease. :D

(Hmm, it may bug her that IRL I've already got a girlfriend. Gulp.)
Dammit. This has to be written into a full-sized story. :thumbsup:

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by LongTimeLurker » Sat Feb 24, 2018 8:18 am

Thanks for the kind words everyone!

Epitaph and australopith, I'm glad you liked the Stage Manager. She almost was cut from the story!
liliwinnt6 wrote:i guess i found something not right for the "Girl Next Door" scenario

if you took the core just from Amber, how do you end up at this line:
"You pry the cores from the two defunct sex-droids and exit the scenario chamber."
I might be referring to the powered-down mom-bot? Link me to the section.

Also, I still do not know how to track things like how many cores you're carrying, so this is all fairly arbitrary. :)
liliwinnt6 wrote:Error saving story: The Witch and the Warrior
Too many branches
Unit Boris cannot continue
Overheat detected!
Taking a break is required
Boris will now take a break ...
System cooling down ...
After that one and this opera, I plan on making the next one a touch simpler :)

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by australopith » Sat Feb 24, 2018 11:57 am

Epitaph wrote:
australopith wrote:
Epitaph wrote:Both of her endings are gold, LongTimeLurker!
I swear I'll fix her, dammit, now that I've won her over. :lovestruck: And take her home where she will be the snarky perfectionist I simply need managing my life–when we're not busy having amazing fun, and when she's not working her new job at a real theatre.

She'll still suspect I'm secretly a robot, and will be annoyed to know she's one... having lived her entire life as a sleeper, she'll have no idea how to program herself, which since she's a perfectionist will bug her without cease. :D

(Hmm, it may bug her that IRL I've already got a girlfriend. Gulp.)
Dammit. This has to be written into a full-sized story. :thumbsup:
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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by KinoLangDanzel » Sun Feb 25, 2018 1:49 am

I really liked the Scenario Chamber story, the ability to choose your own path is something that I've enjoyed greatly. Is there a way to make suggestions for a new chamber, or maybe a new choice on some of the gynoids?
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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Post by LongTimeLurker » Sun Feb 25, 2018 9:07 am

KinoLangDanzel wrote:I really liked the Scenario Chamber story, the ability to choose your own path is something that I've enjoyed greatly. Is there a way to make suggestions for a new chamber, or maybe a new choice on some of the gynoids?
Thanks! You can post suggestions in this thread or on the suggestions wiki page.

Currently made suggestions are:
* Robot apocalypse
* Devil & Angel
* Alien vs Huntress

If you want to suggest a new choice within an existing story, just include a link to the page.

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