Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP - Now with Twine

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Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP - Now with Twine

Postby LongTimeLurker » Wed Jul 17, 2013 8:08 pm

UPDATE

Scenario Chamber is now in Twine! Download the zipped html from the wiki and run it in your browser.

You can find the story here

The current scenarios Include:
* Girl Next Door
* Swords & Sorcery
* A Night at the Opera (co-written with Epitaph)
* Superheroes

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This is an attempt to write a FYOP story driven by reader suggestion - for any part of the story, feel free to suggest an option on what our second-person protagonist should do! I can't promise I'll be able to field every single one, but I'll try to get a diverse field of responses (at least two per page).

If you'd like to make a suggestion, please paste the URL of the section you're responding to along with a short description of what the option should be. For example, if after reading the first section you would like to suggest that the protagonist runs away screaming, you might post the following:



And if you see a suggestion that you like but hasn't been written, please feel free to second that suggestion!

EDIT - You can also send story suggestions via PM or on the wiki
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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Postby --Battery-- » Thu Jul 18, 2013 12:15 am

well...information about the character has not been revealed yet, i guess information about the protagonist will develop as the story advances, maybe even as flashbacks?
but since he/she has access to an EMPg she/he must have at least a little training in survival , so i think...

http://fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=FYOP/Scenario_Chamber/0001
A)talk to robot
B) keep away
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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Postby The Liar » Thu Jul 18, 2013 5:16 am

http://fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=F ... amber/0001
A) Try to Surrender
B) Attempt to blind it
Trust Me

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Postby LongTimeLurker » Thu Jul 18, 2013 8:34 am

Just to clarify - I'm not asking for people to offer two suggestions per submission (though you're more than welcome to!), but I do I intend to put at least two options per page.

--Battery-- wrote:well...information about the character has not been revealed yet, i guess information about the protagonist will develop has the story advances, maybe even as flashbacks?

I planned on revealing bits about the world through the story, but also on having readers help define who the character is.

--Battery-- wrote:but since he/she has access to an EMPg she/he must have at least a little training in survival , so i think...

http://fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=FYOP/Scenario_Chamber/0001
A)talk to robot
B) keep away

I figured I could combine these two - but could you be more specific with the "talk to robot"? Is the intention to find out information? Stall it? Convince it of something? (and if so, what?)

The Liar wrote:http://fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=FYOP/Scenario_Chamber/0001
A) Try to Surrender
B) Attempt to blind it

Added! And I hope this goes without saying, but if a suggestion ends a story please don't take that to mean I thought it was a "bad" suggestion. I quite like both of these!

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Postby The Liar » Thu Jul 18, 2013 9:12 am

http://fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=F ... amber/0003
A) Make a run for the door while it's distracted
B) Try to stab a shard of your broken radio into it's speaker while it's distracted
Trust Me

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Postby --Battery-- » Thu Jul 18, 2013 3:41 pm

http://fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=FYOP/Scenario_Chamber/0001
A)talk to robot
B) keep awaY

I figured I could combine these two - but could you be more specific with the "talk to robot"? Is the intention to find out information? Stall it? Convince it of something? (and if so, what?)


Sorry about that, by talking i meant something like "don't hurt me" or "stay away" and therefore obtain some imput from the machine, would it give a useful hint? probably not, maybe it would tell something that is not going to be useful until very long or meaningless info about the place, but at least it could confirm the fact that the robot is really going to kill you and not make out with you if you choose to surrender; making you really want to find that EMPg ASAP.

i think you could add this something like "try to reason with android" and maybe it could fit in :

http://fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=F ... amber/0001
C) Reason with android

and also at :

http://fembotwiki.com/index.php?title=F ... amber/0003
A) Reason with android

and both lead to the same answer, and then lead to the character to find that EMPg or use the enviroment some how dying many times in the process :devil: .

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Postby LongTimeLurker » Fri Jul 19, 2013 2:03 am

Updated - I reused options where it seemed appropriate!

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Postby LongTimeLurker » Sat Feb 06, 2016 11:14 pm

Finally got around to adding a section to the Scenari-o-matic: Type in "Girl next door".

Still taking suggestions here or on the wiki.

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Postby Kishin » Sun Feb 07, 2016 8:50 am

Definitely enjoyed this one!
"Individual science fiction stories may seem as trivial as ever to the blinder critics and philosophers of today. But the core of science fiction, its essence has become crucial to our salvation, if we are to be saved at all." - Isaac Asimov

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Re: Scenario Chamber - Reader-driven FYOP

Postby LongTimeLurker » Sun Feb 07, 2016 9:42 am

Thanks!

I saw the wiki was upgraded, maybe I can save some kind of "game status" now...

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