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Thurosis Mekabare shop

Postby T-elos/Thurosis » Thu Mar 03, 2016 4:41 pm

My upcoming Doujinshi "メカバレの時間" (Time of Mekabare)

Do you guys remember the Nova Terra fan Art i made few weeks ago?
I made an additional story to it and the story board can be read on pixiv.
here is the link.
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=55612423
(you might not be able to read it without an account)
i can't upload it on Deviant art yet, because i might get reported...

but still for those who can read it, have fun and i look forward to your oppinions.
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Re: Thurosis Mekabare shop

Postby --Battery-- » Thu Mar 03, 2016 4:45 pm

Image

Ghosts are a humans, GHOSTS ARE HUMAAANS!!

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Re: Thurosis Mekabare shop

Postby T-elos/Thurosis » Thu Mar 03, 2016 5:09 pm

i know, but this plays in the "reality",
the story starts at the "BlizzCon", where they want to show the new merchandise....
Nova-Type got damaged so the staff sold it later to a fan....
but too bad that guy was the wrong choice....
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Re: Thurosis Mekabare shop

Postby --Battery-- » Thu Mar 03, 2016 6:11 pm

i Know, it matters little to me actually. :) (i hate this new smileys.)
But, may i suggest, that perhaps, you turn the characters somewhat...generic?
why does she has to be Nova from Blizzard?
why not an original character in a similar setting and just leave the source material as something your readers ignore?
you can like, name her Rova from Wizard or something like that, just so it doesn't look so...specific and from a very stablished character and company.
i think that is a little more...sexy.
you can even play a little more with the character in that way.
but what do i know.
at least that's my opinion from the bottom of my heart.
CHEEEEERRS!!!

do love me some mekabare.
Nice ending.

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Re: Thurosis Mekabare shop

Postby T-elos/Thurosis » Thu Mar 03, 2016 6:34 pm

Good to know, okay i will make these changes :P
okay then this will be changed to "WizzCon" xD

So anything else?
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Re: Thurosis Mekabare shop

Postby --Battery-- » Thu Mar 03, 2016 6:38 pm

areolas and vagina all the time?
at least on page 4?

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Re: Thurosis Mekabare shop

Postby --Battery-- » Thu Mar 03, 2016 6:43 pm

OOH. you know, perhaps allow "nova" lose control at the ending just before she blows?
like start enjoying realizing she is not the real nova and just a machine before she goes boom?

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Re: Thurosis Mekabare shop

Postby T-elos/Thurosis » Fri Mar 04, 2016 3:13 am

can do that too.
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Re: Thurosis Mekabare shop

Postby T-elos/Thurosis » Sat Mar 05, 2016 3:36 pm

Not really Mekabare, but it is related with robot girl

http://thurosis.deviantart.com/art/Art-Trade-Cerene-outlines-594844180
(going to be colored)

an Art Trade with an Artist called "CRUMVIII", who is also making an animated Ayaka for me.
I look forward to see it.
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Re: Thurosis Mekabare shop

Postby Dolljoints » Sun Mar 06, 2016 2:38 am

I like your style!

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