Ratbat wrote:yeah its true that i probibly belong more on a malebot forum then a fembot forum but male bots are exceedingly rare unless your into transformers (which I am not). I'm female myself but my slice of the pie is very small:
http://www.edenworldsaga.com/stash/wheelofmech.jpg
Ouch... fucking cars?! Is that even possible? The nearest thing i saw was a woman playing with the gearshift, but i tought it was funny, not a turn-on
Ratbat wrote:to clear things up, the story is a chronicle of this race of sentient mecha and their journey to find their place in the world. The 'Mashina" and the "Jotun" are an "all-male" race, but because they were created along with the humans by the same God, they have the ability to transform certain human women into mecha themselves. It also helps to understand that the mecha in this story are more like 'metal/machine elementals" because they are living and are not built.
Ok, makes sense with how the world was built.
Ratbat wrote:the comic just ended the intro story arc, so all the sex, transformation stuff hasnt happend yet. But the 2 charecters who died at the begining were a hint of things to come. The tall 18 foot women was 'infected" by the nanomachine blood of one of the male jotun on a chance encounter. She grew + 300% of size and woke up huge. normaly this blood is deadly to humans but because cheska was cosmicly simular to lance, she turned partially into a mecha. Once the male jotun could 'sence' she was a female machine, he reacted with instinct and raped her there by sealing her transformation with his nanomachines.
Urk! I'm not really into raping but the way you are describing this probably it has nothing to do with a fetish and more with drama. Up till now you made a believable story, so now i'm curious to see how this action will actually come out.... unless it has already happened and you are referring to that moment between lyron and panchun... but it doesn't look like that. On a side note: i really had not understood the connection between the norn cheska and the "jotun" one untill now... damn i'm dumb. Also i tought the last scene where we saw that tall woman fishing was a flashback from when Cheska was alive.
Ratbat wrote:these female humanish mecha are called "Guardias" . Their normal form is the person they were in their former life. if a Guardia knows shes a mech, she can transform when threatend (kinda like a werewolf) into a fighting machine simular to the males.
that explains the "exagons" showing up when cheska got really mad.
Ratbat wrote:the girl at the begining didnt know she was a Jotun herself, and thus didnt know her own potential. when she found out her mecha lover was killed by her previous race, she went into a blind rage and was killed with a Muramite weapon. "Muramite" disrupts the nanomachines inside a mech and makes self repair impossible. the blood crystalizes into red metal and glass and is useless.
Ok, now i understand part of it, Beowulf was "leaking" when hit and instead the jotuns being slashed at the beginning were shown cristallizing. Since when Lyron was half blewn he was also cristal-like i tought it was the way they looken when hurt and "bleeding" sort of unnatural high-speed coagulation or something... instead it was probably how cricatrizing uh..."tissue" looks like on Lyron and had nothing to do with the effect of muramite.
Ratbat wrote:anyway this is the quickest summery i could come up with. im still thinking about how i can incorperate the sex into the comic without turning the rateing of the site up to nc-17. ill probibly load a restricted access tab up or something.
For what i've seen untill now it works best if sex is hinted but not actually shown and a separate section is made with the "revealing" panels. It's actually a rather common "tecnique"
